Your concept for movement is quite satisfying to me. I get the sense of a waterfall's presence. It fits its principle very well. Your drawing for rhythm lacks repetition and could be improved by adding some.
Your work looks like it was well thought out and planed. I like your unity very much. It represents the meaning of unity very well. I'm not sure how you represented balance.
Your balance is more of an asymmetrical balance which makes it different from the others that would do a symmetrical balance. Your pattern rhythm on the other hand could use some work. It doesn't feel like it is a repetition of visual movement. Overall really good though.
I think your pattern and emphasis stand out, out of all your principles as they fit perfectly. You could use a little work on one or two principles,as they don't fit the principle, but overall great job.
Your concept for movement is quite satisfying to me. I get the sense of a waterfall's presence. It fits its principle very well. Your drawing for rhythm lacks repetition and could be improved by adding some.
ReplyDeleteYour work looks like it was well thought out and planed. I like your unity very much. It represents the meaning of unity very well. I'm not sure how you represented balance.
ReplyDeleteYour balance is more of an asymmetrical balance which makes it different from the others that would do a symmetrical balance. Your pattern rhythm on the other hand could use some work. It doesn't feel like it is a repetition of visual movement. Overall really good though.
ReplyDeleteI think your pattern and emphasis stand out, out of all your principles as they fit perfectly. You could use a little work on one or two principles,as they don't fit the principle, but overall great job.
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